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Hi! Can i write about mistakes i have made growing up and how it helped me in character development .. would it be good for college essay ?

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Hey! First of all I wanted to thank you for this it is really helping me out , though just a question for a few universities like University of Leicester or like LSE university I'm not able to find the common data set, is there any way I'll be able to access it?

4:55 agenda 5:29 purpose of personal statement 6:22 4 qualities of a great personal statement 7:36 topics to avoid 10:10 2 potential essay structure: narrative or montage 12:05 montage structure explained 15:35 hook 24:25 tips for personal statement 27:08 Step 1: how to brainstorm your own topic 27:58 excersize 1: “I love” and “I know” 33:10 Excersize 2: “identities” 35:42 how do these excersize connect with personal statement? 37:28 Step 2: connect to core values 37:34 values excersize 40:39 Narrative structure explained 41:45 Feelings and Needs excersize 45:44 Part 2 52:00 q and a

Late to the party, but would writing about how a sports injury from a fairly uncommon sport (Wrestling) changed my mindset on quitting? If it's too cliche, I have other topics ready but have a draft done for this but realize it may be too basic. I don't focus on the injury, it's just used as an introduction. Thank You!

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My paper would have been totally different the whole paper would have been about what I would build first and why culture landscape location money the benefit of what I’ll build to the people the location the economy this is all over the place

I’m tryna be a better writer so my problem is wondering why did she mention so much that has nothing to do with the question I think this is a D-

Do you think I can writw about my personality with examplss ? ( I don t have a spike

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There are a lot introverts out there who don’t have extracurricular activities and you make it sound like they’re kinda doomed.

SO helpful and interesting to see the screens from a college that tracks demonstrated interest. Thank you!

Quick question, if I have an upcoming internship the summer after my senior year, can I still list it on my college app? If so, what verbs would I use?

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Like I am hesitant about writing in the personal common app essay about " the blessing of being extrovert " or how eachHarry Potter character represent me.I love both topics and I can write both freely which one you think is the best to stand out?

Hi i am really willing to write about my business ( it's drawing on glasses) is this a good topic to stand out? And i draw alot about my country (palestine) do you think it will affect badly? So i should delete some posts

Link? As an international admission student can i join your Course?

Pls I'm an international student wanting to apply to university of Pennsylvania, pls i wanna know if these letters re to be type and upload, pls explain to me I'm perplex

I just couldn't put the pen down after this one! Excellent video TYSM!!!

Just wanted to say thank you I got into a T20 with low gpa but good essays thanks to your template

<30% of all scholarships go to white people, 80% of the <30% go to females. White males only have a 6% chance of getting a scholarship despite women making up the majority college applicants, students, and graduates……. You’re the only white male I could find talking about how to get scholarships. All I found was either Asian or African American women on here talking about how they won 30+ scholarships and giving advice like they won them on “merit” alone.

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What if your only hobby is playing video games

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Hi Ethan!!! Do you also help out international students?

It's unfortunate that students have to hide their religion or political persuasion because college admissions people are all liberal or Woke (according to the speaker) and don't want to have a true diversity of ideas at these elite universities.

What does Hunger mean as a value? Is that similar to drive and determination? Thanks

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sir, can we write about different incident in our life in one essay or just one particular incident ?

I am the youngest of two I grew up in a small town I lived in Buffalo (brrrr) I love pizza I love nature I love chandeliers I love round tables (great for discussions) I enjoy skipping rocks I would choose the mountains over the beach I have a daughter I have a husband who was born in Africa and raised in France I hate doing the dishes I like folding laundry I have been to a fish rodeo I love to do public speaking My friendships mean a lot I love comedies SNL is the best! The Office forever! I won't live in the cold anymore I was a first generation student

Thank you so much for this! I had a question: In the personal Common App Essay, do we have to talk about a career that we want to go in... I'm currently undecided. I did mention the values that are important to me and that I can bring to a college, but I'm not sure if this is enough. Thanks!

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I can absorb new information like a sponge I prefer to make everything in a one night Mostly i will try to do everything in my own way My ideas might be abnormal I can lead a group to an improvement I never felt really happy about winning like the most people do I love to take a leader role My dream is to change world economy in a new way Breaking is the most working strategy to make new Egoism of every member is a key to a victory Abuse don't really affecting me Emotions doesn't control me I can turn off my humanism if is needed to Everyone is a main heroes of their life Creativity and uniqueness are important If there is no fun, what the point of work Material benefits aren't always the most important one Utopia for humanity is equality of everyone Human is humans main enemy Love is a rebirth